DD2015 - Day 17 - Page 02

The root of your writing whilst sounding agreeable originally, did not really settle well with me after some time. Someplace within the paragraphs you managed to make me a believer ununttfoarely just for a very short while. I still have a problem with your leaps in logic and one might do well to help fill in all those breaks. In the event that you actually can accomplish that, I would undoubtedly be impressed.